La-dee-dah, reading these completely out of order and I don't care!
Proofreading issues *sigh
The story isn't bad. The characters are actually a bit built up.
I kept waiting for a legit Dante-insane scene, and it never happened. Annoyed me. Right cock-tease, that is, telling us he's completely bat-shit crazy and then having him be not actually off his rocker.