Reader's Discretion Advised

Could have been better.I mean, overall, it's surprisingly good, but I just...The thing in the end with the saving him thing and the that thing...could have been worked in a less abrupt way.And the sex always feels really random in hers. As if they were made to be porn, so they have plot, but it's...porn plot, if that makes sense. Actually, I could be completely wrong, seeing as I really have no idea what porn plot is or would be. I suppose then I should say it's my impression of what Porn With Plot would be like? But it's not quite a PWP in the Plot? What Plot? sense...