It was good until the author decided to ignore the intrigue xe spun and end it on a focusing-on-the-romance-to-the-exclusion-of-all-else note.~sigh.Parts of it were a bit awk. Like "O_o why are you explaining this beyond 'to further the plot'?"But it was still good-ish, I guess. 1-star penalty for the ending/awk direction change and accumulated other awk phrasings and slight lack of development in places (in all honesty, it was how it ended that decided the "go down" for me...)To sum up, I agree with Megan Derr.