I agree with Chris. This really was perfect. Looking back, it seems hard to believe it was as short as it was (under 30 pages!) because it was so amazingly complete. There was plot. There was characterization. There was humor. There was angst. There was even a pretty well developed backstory. I'd have to say this is probably the only time (so far?) that I've wanted to give out "extra credit," that I've been so wowed by a story it makes me sad the highest rating I can give it is a full score.The tension was perfectly balanced for its length, and yet, it was still so damn sweet.