I got bored around chapter 4, I think. Regardless, it actually isn't bad. It seems a little out there at times, but I was willing to make excuses for it since it is online fic. The writing is good - surprisingly so for online lit, but maybe my standards have just been artificially lowered... - and the story is solid. It's just not...engaging, I guess. It would make a good novel, I think, but it wasn't quite what I was looking for atm.