Random and really unsexy. Seriously, I do NOT understand why the fat Tate submits. It's always "*sigh* I gotta do this" and "man, this sucks, but I gotta endure it" and "*shrug*, well, that's life as a sub."
Like dude, where's the "joy in submission" and all that shit? If you do everything with reluctance and very little payout, why bother?
Also, what's up with James? James is an asshole. He's a selfish megolomanic asshole and I don't like him. Most of the shit he does seems more of "because he can" and not much more reason other than that. Something about the way it's written just makes him seem sleazy. Maybe it's because Tate seems so reluctant to do all the stuff James asks for.
The rest of it is meh.