Very cute story.It kind of annoyed me that Alistair was dead-set on the idea that dominating someone meant disrespecting him, especially considering that he's a Dom.One other thing that bothered me...wincing doesn't make sound. Sometimes, winces are accompanied by a little hissing intake of breath, which might make sound. Wincing itself, does not. I have no idea why Sheridan might regret any "tiny sound" that came from a wince, because I'm sure the sound of facial muscles contracting is well beyond the human hearing range.