It...wasn't bad, I suppose, but throughout the entire thing, it just felt like all of whatever developed was for the sake of the kink...if that makes sense. Like, the developments in plot weren't because of natural progression but like means-to-and-end-ish - the end, of course, being the kink. It just felt like pwp with some excuse plot thrown it. It makes it seem like porn instead of a transgressive arthouse piece, if that makes sense. Still, the concepts are interesting, so I gave it the second star.It was frustrating to read. There'd be a good or good-ish moment, and then would come an excuse plot moment that just would rip the passing, budding moment of awesome apart.